Here are the reviews from FanFiction.Net before they decided to ditch the NC17 stories. If you'd like, send a review on this story, and I'll add it to the list. Bad, or good, as you can see from what is here. Thanks.
| Reviewer | Date |
| Jenn (nutiko_might_be@hotmail.com) | 2002-08-03 |
| That was cute! I Swear i think im gunna cry and i never cry. i havent cried dince grade 3 and im in year 7 now. keep writing musashi and kojiro lemon (jessie and james lemon) I love this fic PLEASE WRITE MOOOORE |
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| LiterateCarrot | 2002-01-01 |
| HAHAHAHA!
Talking dirty was never so FUNNY!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! |
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| Raven Chaos (ravenkoruki@aol.com) | 2001-10-06 |
| Amazing how you
used names of Poke'mon as innuendos. |
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| The Mighty Schnarz | 2001-08-29 |
| ngaaah!!
"diglett"? "onix"? "arbok"? too much much
for sheltered me!! strangely funny, though; i AM slightly hyper... |
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| Rusty | 2001-06-21 |
| Now, normally I
only like romantic musy stuff, but I loved this! The puns were soooooo
`great! You captured the essence of my beloved rockets! Bravo! |
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| Dark Iris | 2001-06-07 |
| Jeez...a
little ooc for those two but otherwise pretty good. The motto usage was a
nice touch. |
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| Alora | 2001-05-27 |
| Ahhh....I see
Jessie and James in a whole new light...with Jessie actually letting James
take control. WOW! Great story |
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| radioactive814 | 2001-05-15 |
| that
was cool....who knew james had it in him??.... |
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| Voltor | 2001-04-26 |
| Whoa...Cool |
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| Lady Myotismon | 2001-04-19 |
| That's
just messed up. |
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| BrocksBabe | 2001-04-10 |
| that was so
corny... oh my goodness, thats hilarious... rofl... that was so so so so
so so corny!! ahh!!! ha ha ha... anyways, it was a little strange but the
corny jokes made up for it all! |
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| Jetkitten | 2001-03-25 |
| Hey
I didn't know you were a rocketshipper. ..maybe I did and forgot. |
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| saiyangerl | 2001-03-25 |
| Personally I think
that Jesse & James are out of character but it was cute and funny how
they used the motto. ;-) |
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| darkiegal (if_u_reallywannaknow@ASK.com) | 2001-03-19 |
| cool
fic! loved the diglett and the onix thing! Ur a pretty good about these
things no? |
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| Jadesfire2 | 2001-02-04 |
| that was
very...graphic. but i enjoyed it a lot. good work. |
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| Evil Jason And Lord Darem | 2001-02-02 |
| Both:
Double Team! Lord Darem: Slightly canon, isn't it? Evil Jason: Yeah, but
cool. |
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| Firefox | 2001-01-29 |
| Wild man. The only
lemon that actually had Pokémon references! (10) |
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| ZeoViolet | 2001-01-16 |
| *laughs*
I don't make a habit of reading adult fics a lot, but this one was pretty
funny in the end. So, good job. |
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| L Meiling | 2001-01-14 |
| 'How 'bout those
mews' that line's golden. Whoa, can we say 'kinky'? |
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| Dogidog8 | 2001-01-14 |
| i
always knew there wuz sometin between jesse and james, someting romantic
and sensual, any way good story, and dont wory about that guy who doesnt
like pokemon, hes full of major , will c ya |
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| Pok | 2001-01-13 |
| Sad. Odd. Sad. |
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| Cartman123 | 2001-01-13 |
| HENTAI
FOREVER! |
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| Zeochu | 2001-01-13 |
| LOL!!!!!!!!!! TR sex with tons of Poke references! |
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| Aphiopsyduck (aphiopsyduck@hotmail.com) | 2001-01-12 |
| Great
fic. Nice job. Very mature for an NC-17 fic. Well done. :o) |
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| Gethsemane | 2001-01-12 |
| Good. I especially
liked the clefairy and diglett puns. |
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| Anna | 2001-01-12 |
| I
probably risk my reputation by saying I liked it, but I did! ^_^ I
especially liked Brock's sympathy for TR and leaving them the leftovers! |
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| RocketJadie (JadieCAF@aol.com) | 2001-01-12 |
| wow, that was good!
very amusing, totally in character (argh! there's no escape from the Poké-puns
even in a hentai-fic!), I liked it =) |
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| Wind | 2001-01-12 |
| *grins*
Oh, that was sorta sweet. It was fun to read and everything. Interesting
use of Pokémon terms... ;) Anywayz, I liked it, a very nice story. |
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| jay (rocketeevee@yahoo.com) | 2001-01-12 |
| That was a cool
story and egnore what the bloke below says if he hates pokemon so much why
the hell is he reading pokemon stories??? if anyones sad and perfectic it him. |
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| SOMEONE WHO HATES POKEMON | 2001-01-12 |
| YOU
ARE SAD, PATHETIC, INDIVIDUAL. YOU SPEND YOUR LIFE IN FRONT OF THE
COMPUTER SCREEN WANKING OVER POKEMON. GO TO HELL, AND WRITE SOMETHING
GOOD, YOU PIECE OF SHIT. HAVE A NICE DAY. |
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| Vickie211 | 2001-01-11 |
| Well
done! Very cute. I liked all the double entendres and
"Poke-puns". |
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